Deep Magic is back!

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — May 6, 2016 @ 5:00 am

I’ve been giddy with excitement about this for months now and can finally share it. After a 10 year hiatus, Deep Magic is back! Ten years ago, we shut down the e-zine after a four-year run including 49 issues. In June, exactly ten years later, we’ll be re-launching Deep Magic: the E-zine of Clean Fantasy and Science Fiction. I’ve pulled together the original founders (myself, Jeremy, and Brendon) and we invited some new people to be on the team, like Charlie Holmberg! (many of you know…she’s quite famous now after Disney secured rights to her Paper Magician series). Also on the team and the ‘voice’ behind the Deep Magic social media accounts is Kristin Ammerman. We’ve been joined by an editor I’ve been working with for several years now, Wanda Zimba, as well as a cohort of spectacular First Readers who all jumped on the chance to be part of this.

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Deep Magic will be a bi-monthly e-zine exclusively on Kindle and available worldwide through the Amazon store (tip of the hat to our friends in the UK, Australia, Canada, and many more countries!). The first issue is available for pre-order now. The links are on our website:

www.deepmagic.co (notice the URL is .co not .com — it’s not a typo!)

If you’d like to be on our mailing list (and I hope you do!), you can sign up through the website or on the Deep Magic Facebook page here: Deep Magic e-zine. Those who sign up in the next few days will receive a chance to win a copy of the Kindle version of my upcoming novel, The Thief’s DaughterI’m going to randomly pick from the list of those who have subscribed and will e-mail a link to the e-book which you can download to your device. 

What’s in store in the first issue? If you want to read gripping stories that doesn’t rely on sex, swearing, and graphic violence—you’ve come to the right place! In our first issue (which we’re labeling Issue 50 BTW), we bring you an interview with Brandon Sanderson (thanks to Charlie!). I’ve also provided an original short story of mine called ‘The Beesinger’s Daughter‘ especially for this issue. You will also find an extended sample of Charlie’s latest novel Magic Bitter, Magic Sweet which hasn’t even been published yet. We also have short fiction from Cecilia Dart-Thornton, Carrie Anne Noble, Steve Yeager, and Brendon Taylor. But we will have more than stories. We also have an interview with Harper Voyager executive editor David Pomerico. Oh, and a writing craft article by NYT bestselling author Anthony Ryan. As you can see, we’re bringing some pretty awesome stuff. We think you’ll love it so much you’ll want to tell all your friends about it on social media (and Kristin hopes that happens too!).

I really believe it was the experience of working on Deep Magic ten years ago that made me the author I am today. I’m passionate about this e-zine because I have a deep conviction that readers are hungering for more cleanreads and just don’t know where to find them. I also want to help other authors get published and paid professional rates. Deep Magic allows me to combine the two. I’m incredibly grateful to have been blessed with the opportunity to see this vision fulfilled.

Now quit reading and stop by the new website!

www.deepmagic.co

-Jeff

 

Kindle First: The Queen’s Poisoner (my new book!)

Filed under: Jeff's Blog,Novels — March 1, 2016 @ 9:08 am

It’s finally here — the big secret I’ve been hinting at for months! When Amazon Publishing offered me the Kindle First deal for my new book last year, I was giddy with excitement but couldn’t talk about it openly. Here’s how it works. For Amazon Prime members, you get to select one free book a month through the Kindle First program. This is going on in the US, UK, and Australia for The Queen’s Poisoner. But it gets even better. If you’re not an Amazon Prime member and you still want to read it before the pub date (April 1st, no joke!), you can download the Kindle version now for a much reduced price. It’s a screaming deal for a brand new book.

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But the news is better still. This is also my first book that 47North is publishing it in Hardcover. They rarely do this but I’ve been pushing for it all along and they’re taking a risk to see how my fans react to it. So if you have *ever* wanted to own one of my books in hardcover, please order this one! Get the kindle version too. No problem. Oh, and for those who will ask about the Audible version–yes, the narrator of the Muirwood series (Kate Rudd) performs the voices for this new trilogy.

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This book will be followed on May 31 by the sequel, The Thief’s DaughterAnd soon to follow, on September 6th, will be The King’s Traitor. Yes, all three books are coming out a few months apart. I’m so excited! Here’s the cover for Book 2, all ready to go.

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So what’s it about? This is a new idea that has been bubbling inside me for years and I break new ground in this series. It’s a new world, a new magic system, and the characters–I’ve just fallen in love with them. In this series, the main protagonist starts as a young boy in book 1 then becomes a teenager in book 2 and an adult in book 3. I’ve never skipped so much history between books before, never written such a young hero before, but it really works. My editors absolutely loved this series and thought each book got better and better, upping the stakes and making the situations our hero faces more and more desperate. This series is an emotional roller coaster. I think you’re going to love it.

I’m so glad that I can finally talk about the Kingfountain series. 47North really wanted to surprise you (my fans) in a good way with this Kindle First deal and discount. I even went to Hollywood in December to film some short videos introducing the book. You can find them on the Amazon page about the book.

Thanks for being patient with the big secret. I hope you enjoy my newest creation and are entranced by it as well.

Hope to see some of you at LDStorymakers conference in May!

 

What love really looks like

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — February 12, 2016 @ 8:19 pm

I don’t know if I’ve been a hopeless romantic for most of my life, but probably so. All my books have some romance in them–well, except maybe the Wishing Lantern! One of the reasons I’ve loved The Empire Strikes Back so much is it coined the phrase “scruffy-looking nerf herder” which continues to be an inside joke in my house.

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As a kid, I also completely got hooked on the cult HBO favorite “Somewhere in Time” and thought how cool it would be to time travel back to 1912 to find the right girl. Science Fiction meets history? Love that theme.

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So now I’m a dad, the father of five kids, and wondering how to raise them in a world that is obsessed with porn, unrealistic body images, objectification, almost zero father-figure role models, and pretty much pushes the boundaries to the edge and beyond just to get noticed.

True story – this week my teenage daughter related a conversation in one of her classes between a group of guys and girls talking about the various ‘body parts’ that they were attracted to. Nothing about personality, nothing about qualities of character. Body parts. She’s told me once that if someone isn’t looking into her eyes, they’re not looking at her real self. “I’m up here,” she said, gesturing in a circle around her face.

Added to this conversation have been several exchanges I’ve had recently with friends about the new Shannara Chronicles show on MTV. I was super excited to watch it because it’s based on my all-time favorite fantasy novel, Elfstones of Shannara which is the book that lit the fire in my head and made me want to write. As I watched some of the promotional trailers for it, I began to get an unsettled feeling about it. It was produced and funded by MTV, after all. So I opted to wait things out instead of watch it right away. I’ve had friends and family who have seen it and I’ve read many reviews, including the parental warnings on IMDB.com. Let’s just say I’m disappointed (but not surprised) to learn it’s very sexualized and violent. It’s not Game of Thrones, to be sure. But I have decided to wait for VidAngel to release it. If I’m uncomfortable with my kids watching a movie, it’s probably not something I should see either.

So how do you raise children today and teach them what love really looks like? I’d love to hear what you do. For myself, I try to role model at home and smile when the kids catch us kissing in the kitchen. For my wife’s birthday, I shared with her an excerpt from a great novel I’ve been reading called Can You Forgive Her?  by Anthony Trollop. The 19th century author perfectly captured, in my opinion, the essence of true love (not to be confused with ‘to blaive’ and as we all know, ‘to blaive’ means to bluff!). It’s come closer to my belief than anything else I’ve read.

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“I do not know that Lady Glencora’s heart was made of that stern stuff which refuses to change its impressions; but it was a heart, and it required food. To love and fondle someone,—to be loved and fondled, were absolutely necessary to her happiness. She wanted the little daily assurance of her supremacy in the man’s feelings, the constant touch of love, half accidental half contrived, the passing glance of the eye telling perhaps of some little joke understood only between them two rather than of love, the softness of an occasional kiss given here and there when chance might bring them together, some half-pretended interest in her little doings, a nod, a wink, a shake of the head, or even a pout. It should have been given to her to feed upon such food as this.”   –Anthony Trollope

So for this blog, I recommend watching or reading something truly romantic. Something that goes deeper than skin. Something that makes your heart skip a beat, smile, and squeeze a hand. If you’re looking for something safe for the kiddos (like I always am), I can’t endorse enough Brian Bird’s excellent TV series “When Calls the Heart.” Season 3 begins in a week. Can’t wait #hearties!

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Love is in the eyes.

 

-Jeff

The lonely profession

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — January 22, 2016 @ 5:51 pm

I’ve had some conversations and interactions lately that have reminded me that writing is truly “the lonely profession.” Please don’t get me wrong, I’m not complaining nor is this posting a rant. Being an introvert, I’m very comfortable in my own head (where all my characters live!) and I don’t often feel the lack of human interaction because of friends, my church, and my awesome family.

 

But I do remember what it was like before my big break happened. I remember and even sometimes still feel the loneliness and the self-doubt that plagues so many of us who spin worlds with our words. Most of you reading this aren’t writers and wouldn’t understand. But I know that there are some reading this blog who are aspiring writers themselves. This one is for you.

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My first advice: Stick With It.

 

In all the literature I’ve read, all the motivational talks I’ve listened to, all the interviews I’ve watched, the common thread of success can be summarized in one word: persistence. Being a writer, you have to be able to tolerate criticism, relentlessly write, read a ton, and interact little with other people. As my wife likes to remind people, I worked in the tech industry for 20+ years before my writing took off. If you are writing for any other reason than you positively, absolutely, cannot not write and your head will actually explode if you don’t, then it’s probably not a hobby or career path you’ll survive. There is a lot of waiting, a lot of waiting anxiously, and a lot of uncertainty. The market is totally saturated with authors in all genres right now since self-publishing became viable, if you hadn’t been able to tell! We’re all competing for the same readers, which means author royalties have been trending down. If you can handle this then by all means proceed to my next paragraph.

 

My second bit of advice: Create a Mastermind

 

Before I signed with 47North, I thought writers had an “editor” they worked with. What I didn’t realize was that it truly takes a mastermind to produce a novel. Let me introduce you to mine. First off, there is my wife and best friend Gina. I use her for a sounding board for my ideas and she’s one of my early readers who gives me very critical and helpful advice, especially around dialogue and characters. If any of the character relationships in my books have left you all tingly inside, you can thank her. I also have been lucky to have support from some very important people who help me during my process. One is my sister Emily who has read practically every story I’ve ever written. I think she hasn’t read my high school garbage, but that’s a good thing. She’s been through the wilderness and watched my writing style grow and mature. I also have a few kind-hearted friends from church named Karen, Robin, and Shannon who always get the first crack at early versions of my books before they get submitted to my publisher.

 

Once I’ve submitted a manuscript, the size of the mastermind increases. I have a great editor at 47North named Jason Kirk who reads my books fast and provides some directional feedback on what’s working and what isn’t. It’s mostly very high level and always helpful. After he’s read it, the next person who looks at it is my dev editor, the talented Angela Polidoro. I’ve nicknamed her “Eagle Eyes Polidoro” because she has an absolutely uncanny ability to spot consistency errors not only within a book, but within a series. She keeps me honest and provides the line-by-line, page-by-page comments that every author really needs. I didn’t even understand what dev editors were (it’s short for ‘developmental editing’) before I started working with them at 47North. They are super, super important. They really help bring the manuscript to the next level and are absolutely worth the cost, in my opinion. But that’s not it. After the dev edit, which catches and fixes a lot of problems, the next step is the copy-edit. Part of my team is a fantastic editor named Wanda Zimba who has been with my books for a while now. She knows my style, knows my books, and finds the pesky grammar mistakes that made it past everyone else. I don’t think I’ve ever published a book that was 100% free of errors. That may be impossible. But you should see all that we do catch. It’s impressive.

 

There are others who are part of the mastermind as well, which I don’t want to ignore but don’t have time to write about presently (like marketing, publicity, etc). Most self-published authors have to play many or all those roles themselves. But I highly, highly encourage you to get professional editing services (dev editors and copy editors). You can listen to your early readers and that’s helpful. But what an author really needs is someone who doesn’t pull punches and offer concrete advice, page by page, to improve the flow of the story. I wouldn’t have made it without these folks.

 

My third bit of advice: Stay Home and Write

 

There is a lot of misperception about the life of an author out there. Very few do book signings. I’ve only done a handful myself. There are some authors I know that wouldn’t write books if they couldn’t meet fans at a signing booth at a convention. I’m perfectly happy staying at home and writing, so I tend to be a minimalist when it comes to this area. Here’s the brutal truth. They are costly and rarely provide the return on investment (ROI) for the publisher or the author. The nice thing about them is meeting your publishing team and fellow authors. When you get a bunch of us together, it can get pretty rowdy. But they are an expense, not an activity that generates much, if any, income.

 

My last bit of advice: Say Thank You

 

Now this post was targeting those who want to be authors someday. What about the rest of you? You, my friends, are the audience. You cannot know the good your words can do in lifting up a lonely author’s spirits. A piece of advice I’ve heard regularly and totally ignore is “never read your reviews.” I disagree and I read every single one, the good, the ugly, and the vague. I really try not to let my head get all puffy with the praise and I shrug off the criticism. I try to appreciate all the feedback I get as a gift. If you particularly enjoyed reading a book, take the time to post a review on Goodreads or on Amazon’s website. Your feedback actually helps sell more books. Take a moment to write a personal note to the author if you really, really, really like a book. We all love hearing from our fans. Even better, help spread the word. You are the single most important factor in whether more people read a book. You have tremendous power.

 

I cannot tell all of you how grateful I am to you, my readers, for allowing me to have this new career. I love being home when my kids get home from school and hearing about their day. I love researching new book ideas and creating new stories to spellbind and entrance you and keep you up at night WAY TOO LATE. You cannot know how much it means to me to have you as a fan.

 

Thank you for being on this journey with me!

Jeff

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Teaching at 2016 Storymakers Conference

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — December 10, 2015 @ 6:21 pm

 

I’ve been invited to teach two classes at the 2016 LDStorymakers Conference being held in Provo, UT the first weekend of May. I’ve always heard good things about it. Whether or not you are LDS, you can register and attend the conference. Since it’s primarily for writers trying to improve the craft and understand the publishing industry, I came up with several pitches and two were accepted. The classes I’ll be teaching will be on Saturday, May 7, 2016. And by the way? Brandon Sanderson will be speaking during lunch.

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Here are the descriptions of the two classes:

Class#1: Your First Million Words

It’s common to look at the overnight success stories of rare individuals who make it big on their first novel as the goal. But Jeff discovered on his journey that he had to write and toss his first million words before he’d practiced the craft enough to be successful at it. Come to this class for time management, writing advice from an author who worked fulltime at a high tech company, served as a bishop, and squeezed in writing one night a week for two hours…and is now well past his second million words. This class is about finding the will and the time to pursue the lonely road walked by writers.

Class#2: Indie Track: Understanding Amazon

How well do you understand the indie publishing market? Do you know the difference between Kindle Direct and Kindle Unlimited and how they pay royalties? Have you heard you can be paid to write stories set in another author’s world? What’s it like to work with one of the Amazon Publishing imprints (Montlake Romance, 47North, Thomas & Mercer)? Come learn about different resources Amazon has enabled to help indie writers get noticed in a crowded publishing market that is only getting more crowded.

There are many other great classes being offered as well, and you can find the offerings here:

http://ldstorymakersconference.com/schedule-overview/

Registration began on December 9.

Other news – I’ve seen the final MUIRWOOD:THE LOST ABBEY graphic novel! The print version will include extra pages at the end showing some original design sketches and the transformation from concept to final art. It’s a great collectible and will be available through Amazon. You can pre-order it here in the US or here in the UK.

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(pub date: January 27, 2016)

I have some big news coming next year, so stay tuned! I’m so grateful to all of you who have continued to support me and have shared my books with so many others. I can’t express my gratitude enough. Thank you for making my dreams become real. Thanks for the e-mails, the posts to my blog, the tweets, and Facebook messages and even the notes and cards. You are amazing!

I want to wish all of you a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year! #ASaviorIsBorn

Jeff

 

 

A thought for this week

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — November 16, 2015 @ 2:04 pm

Thanks to the fantastic Kindle Daily Deal e-mails, I recently picked up the e-book version of Think Like a Freak by Steven Levitt and Stephen Dubner, authors of Freakonomics and it gave me a lot to think about. There is a passage in their original book that made me seriously consider quitting writing altogether. They said that the publishing industry was rigged and that New York editors and agents controlled nearly all of what was published. Even if you played by all the traditional rules, the odds of succeeding were still stacked against you. But I did not quit and let that paragraph spur me on to pursue my dream. I’m so glad I didn’t quit!

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As you know, I love collecting quotes and I found a few treasures in this book.

The first is a quote from George Bernard Shaw:

“Few people think more than two or three times a year. I have made an international reputation for myself by thinking once or twice a week.”

I loved that quote! So many times we’re tempted to let others do our thinking for us based on media reports or social media posts. Writing books takes a lot of thinking and I absolutely love the creative process and thinking up a new story.

Here’s another great quote from the book:

“Raw talent is overrated: people who achieve excellence—whether at golf or surgery or piano-playing—were often not the most talented at a young age, but became expert by endlessly practicing their skills. Is it possible to endlessly practice something you don’t enjoy?”

There it is again, the power of persistence, the power of doing what you love.

Several years ago, I wrote a blog posting called “A Manifesto on Virtue” where I described what and why I write. Months after writing it, I was offered a book deal with Amazon Publishing and the rest, as they say, is history. So here’s my little addendum to the Manifesto. This idea struck my powerfully this last week and so I wrote it down on an index card to remind myself. This quote is from me:

I love telling stories that change people. Change the way they look at themselves. Change their thinking about an issue. That pushes them to consider a truth that perhaps they hadn’t considered before. Stories have magic. The right kind of stories change us from the inside. I want to tell those kind!

I’ve had several people ask me already what I’m writing next. I’m not ready to make an announcement yet, but don’t worry, I’m hard at work on another series which will launch next year. My publisher thinks it’s the best thing I’ve ever written. It’s an ambitious story that has stretched me past my comfort zone many times. Stay tuned and listen for the distant sound of waterfalls.

My new series is coming in the spring.

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Back home and ready for the launch of VOID

Filed under: Uncategorized — October 14, 2015 @ 3:58 pm

I had a great time at New York Comic Con last weekend. There was a huge banner for the upcoming Shannara Chronicles show as well as over 160,000 visitors. Being an introvert, it was a bit overwhelming, but I had a great time signing books, my new graphic novel, and speaking on a panel with many illustrious authors.

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One of the questions asked during the panel was about trends in Science Fiction and Fantasy literature and whether we (as authors) follow trends or try to invent new ones. If you look at the top bestsellers of Fantasy right now, there is a lot of paranormal (I’ve heard that the big money is in writing about billionaire shapeshifters) and a lot of grimdark (fantasy worlds that are violent, amoral, and depressing). Most of us agreed that we don’t try to follow the trends. We write what we’re passionate about.

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During the convention, I had the opportunity to talk to lots of people, including an editor I know at one of the top publishing houses as well as my own amazing publishing team. What struck me from multiple conversations is the sense that there are so many new books flooding the genre that it’s getting progressively more difficult to win readers. The publishing industry isn’t stagnating, it’s a vibrant and highly competitive market place. What everyone is trying to figure out though is what makes you (as a reader) tick. I’m not sure you even realize the power you have when you post a review to Amazon or Goodreads, mention a book in a blog or on your Facebook or Twitter feed. The power of word of mouth, from friend to friend, person to person, is so much more influential than stranger to stranger or any other selling method. Every publisher is trying to know what makes readers share the books they love with each other.

I just wanted to thank you, my loyal readers, not only for reading this blog but for reading my books and all the times you’ve mentioned them to someone else. When you do that it’s mostly invisible, but oh so powerful. It’s what drives this interesting market.

In two weeks is the launch of the final book in the Covenant of Muirwood trilogy: The Void of Muirwood. I hope you’ve appreciated 47North publishing these books in such short order. It looks promising that my next series will be done like that too. More on that later!

Now, while it’s fresh in your mind, go tell someone else about a book you’ve liked! I recently enjoyed Charlie Holmberg’s Followed by Frost. I review the books I read on Goodreads to help pass along ones that have Virtus themes.

And leave a comment on how you first discovered one of my books.

 

-Jeff

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(ran into a long-time friend from my Intel days at JFK airport on my way out of New York this weekend!)

What’s next?

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — September 15, 2015 @ 5:30 pm

Today is Pub Day for Book 2 of the new Covenant of Muirwood series- CIPHERS OF MUIRWOOD. This is the fastest cadence I’ve ever released a book series and you can expect more of this in the future. The final book in the trilogy will come out in October. Question for you readers — how many of you are waiting until VOID comes out before starting the series? I have a theory that some are waiting to binge-read the entire series back-to-back. Add a comment at the end and let me know where you fit!

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So what’s next? Obviously, the next issue of MUIRWOOD: THE LOST ABBEY. Issue #2 comes out on September 23rd. I got my author copies yesterday and my kids began fighting over it immediately. Even my youngest has been reading it. I love how this story is told in pictures. It’s safe for kids, unless they have a fear of spiders, serpents, and creatures in the mist.

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So what’s next after that? I’ll be at New York Comic Con again in October, so stop by and say hi if you’re there.

But I know what you’re really asking. What’s coming next. What am I working on now? Well, it’s a secret. I may have to kill you if you find out. All I can say is…keep a wary eye out for The Queen’s Poisoner. Sshhhh, don’t tell!

 

-Jeff

 

Author Appearances

Filed under: Jeff's Blog — August 18, 2015 @ 11:31 am

So today is the launch day of Banished of Muirwood, the first book in the Covenant of Muirwood series and the first of three books that will be published back-to-back, one per month. I’m super excited that 47North was willing to try a new publishing cadence like this. I hope you appreciate not having to wait a year in between my books.

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I will be making a few author appearances over the next few months, so I wanted to give you the details. If you happen to be nearby any of these, please come by and say hi and I’ll sign books for you. Here is the schedule so far:

Worldcon (aka Sasquan) – Saturday August 22nd at 3:30pm (Grand Davenport hotel, Spokane, WA)

Ken’s Comics (Rocklin, CA) – Saturday September 12 at 12:00pm (4845 Granite Dr, Rocklin, CA)

New York Comic Con – Friday/Saturday October 10-11 (time TBD) (Javits Center, NYC)

I’ve heard that comic book stores have been running out of Issue#1 of MUIRWOOD: THE LOST ABBEY. I’d recommend calling your local comic book store in advance to reserve a copy. There are several ways you can read this series…in single issue comic books (available at comic book stores in the US and Canada), through comiXology, through your Kindle, and in a graphic novel compilation you can now pre-order here

Stay tuned for more and for news about my next series to launch in June 2016.

Happy pub day! Hope to see you soon!

Jeff

 

Special announcement: Muirwood is part of Kindle Worlds

Filed under: Uncategorized — July 14, 2015 @ 9:21 pm

I’ve been keeping this a secret for almost a year. That’s especially difficult when I’m so excited about it. Before I left my day-job, I was approached by the folks running Kindle Worlds with the idea of opening up the world of Muirwood for others to write in. I’m absolutely thrilled to announce that it is not only possible but happening.

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What does this mean?

A new Kindle Worlds has just opened up and there are already stories you can buy set in the world of Lia, Sowe, Pasqua, and Colvin. Friends and family have asked me if I was reluctant to let other people “play in my sandbox”. I’ve been reading the stories that were written in time for the launch and I’ve been thrilled to find other authors genuinely trying to capture the magic of the Medium and the “feel” of the world.

Here are the first (of hopefully many) new stories:

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Where to purchase them? Click here

As I’ve been reading these new stories, I’ve been delighted at how faithful to the original trilogy the authors have tried to be. I’ve spent hours getting sucked into these stories and, quite frankly, geeking out at them.  This is just the beginning.

If you are a writer, or aspiring to be one, and would like to learn more about writing in the world of Muirwood, please see the Kindle Worlds page dedicated to Muirwood: https://kindleworlds.amazon.com/world/Muirwood

I’ll be talking about this more in detail, but wanted to get the word out on launch day! I hope that you will enjoy these new stories as much as I have.

So – what do you think about this? Leave a comment and let me know!